The Siege Of Antica...
This would probably be the first story that I ever wrote, barring the ones that I used to write for my English exams at school. Found this on an old battered down leather covered diary. A story about hope. Ah! Such is the naivety of youth.
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The moon peaked through the drifting clouds to bleach the
green slopes of the valley of Antica with a haunting shade of white. The few
log huts that lay scattered over the hills, lay dark and quiet. Their owners
sleeping peacefully in their beds after spending a long tiring day on the
slopes of Mt.Antica, where they were out grazing their sheep, little aware of
the approaching danger. A distant blood curling howl was heard in the valley,
echoing off the surrounding mountains that towered overhead. Though none of the
shepards heard it, for it was too little a noise to wake such tired souls, but
it was heard by their beasts of labour and caused great distress and agitation
amongst them. They all knew who that dreaded howl belonged to, The Great Wolves
of Blackforest, a beastly pack of the mightiest and most deadly wolves in the
country for whom the unguarded sheep were easy prey. The sheep sensed this and
there was a general uproar in their yards as doom approached with every passing
second.
Santiano, the son of shepard Antigo, felt a queer sense of
uneasiness in his heart as he lay tossing and turning in his bed. He got up to
drink some water to ease his nerves. While passing by the window he paused to
gaze out and admire the beauty of the landscape. It was then that he noticed
something strange. The sheep were fidgeting about in the yard instead of lying
down peacefully. He went out to see what the matter was. As he stepped out the
door, headed for the yard, the uneasy sensation returned. He felt a chill run
down his spine. Glancing back nervously, he saw, to his horror, long shadows of
some slinking creatures falling on the grass, all headed towards him. Overcome
by panic, he started running around wildly, screaming at the top of his lungs, “The
wolves are coming!”
Awakened by the commotion, his father, Antigo, came out to
witness the same chilling sight that greeted his son except that the wolves
were nearer. He could see their glowing eyes, their bared teeth, the drool
rolling of their red tongues and the faint gurgle in their throats. He was
stunned. What could he do, alone against a pack of about fifty wolves? With no
one near enough to help him, it would be sheer foolishness to try anything. But
then, another thought struck him. What would he do with all his sheep dead? He
did not have enough money to buy more sheep. The sheep provided him with
whatever little that he and his family needed to survive. With them dead, they
all would die of starvation. Then he saw his two year old daughter, Arlena’s
face swim before his eyes. Agonizingly he thought of her. How would he feed
her? How would she survive? Anger surged through his body, flames leapt in his
eyes. Seizing an old shepard’s stick, he ran out to defend his sheep, his livelihood.
He’d rather die than see his family suffer.
And so he stood in front of the yard, stick in hand while
the wolves came nearer and nearer. It seemed as if they were mocking him,
laughing at his foolishness. “Away you dirty hounds!” he cried. Raising his
stick above his head, he charged at them, striking the first one of the pack on
the head. With a sickening crunch of broken bone, it fell lifeless on the
ground. The others lunged at him. He killed two others with a mighty swing of
his stick but was soon overpowered by the might of the wolves and fell to the
ground. The beasts leapt onto him to begin the feast. Antigo closed his eyes
and prepared for the most horrible and painful death that a mortal can suffer.
Visions of his family drifted before his eyes, all of them weeping over his
mangled carcass.
Suddenly, a huge cry echoed around the hills. Antigo opened
his eyes, raised his head, hardly daring to believe, and then, to his joy and
amazement, he saw a crowd of men with flaming torches in hand, surging towards
him. The wolves all around him stepped back, dismayed. As the men drew nearer,
all of them fled, tails stuck between their legs, hungrier than before. They
howled all the way back, cursing.
It turned out that Santiago had run all the way over the
hills to the village below and told them of the attack and they all came out to
help. The rest of the night passed without any further excitement. The next
day, all the shepard’s of the valley met at Antigo’s house to discuss possible
safety measures to prevent the wolves from causing any more harm to them.
Finally it was decided that every shepard’s house would be fitted with a large
bell and if anyone needed help, they’d only have to ring it, and all the
shepard’s of Antica would come by to help.
Many years have passed since that night, but in all these
years, not one sheep has been killed by the wolves. Not that there haven’t been
any attacks but because whenever there has been one, the wolves have found
themselves facing the whole village of Antica. Nowadays, they are no longer
seen and it is said that they have gone away looking for a safer hunting
ground. The story of Antigo and the wolves has become an integral part of
Antican history and the old and young still like to recall it with pride to
anyone who would listen. And even though Antigo has long passed away, a
skeleton of a wolf with a cracked skull still hangs in front of his house,
reminding people to rise above their fears.
THE END
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a positive and optimistic one that was :)
ReplyDeleteRare occurrence. Onek onek agger eta!
DeleteThis is one story i love re reading (an honest confession )so much better than your death and darkness gathers around me mode ! love the happily ever after endings..
ReplyDeleteokie dokie. I'll take your word for it.
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